i liked ur poem it was nicely written.it touched me cause i lost my bro to a gun suicide.well neway nice job

loads of great comments u get...but did u have onion lately ananya honey....
Well anyways WOW!!!

thanx a lot ! some keyboard u have!

painful poem....i hope its not a true story...nicely wriiten but.... :-)

Very nice job, please don't kill yourself if this is a autobiographal-type poem!
We need more poets like you, so you have to stay! Very good imagery, I could picture it perfectly in my minds' eye, it makes me want to cry:'(

im likin it!! good job... keep it up hun! lotza love

wow. i thought this was great especially the lines,

Mocking faces, lonely places
Broken promises empty spaces

Theres great descriptions and imagery. xmollyxx

I pray that was a fictional thought and not one that you've felt or thought for yourself...that was deep and heartfelt. No one can make you feel worthless unless you feel that for yourself already...you are worth more than that! You have a gift!! I gave you a 5!Bravo!!

Sarah

beautiful...

I liked it, but it was a bit jerky in some parts. It didn't flow quite right.
"Mocking faces, lonely places
Broken promises empty spaces"
those are two great lines, definitely my favorites out of this poem.

By the way, is cyan the right color to use, it is sorta a greenish-blue...

There are a LOT of suicide poems and I've read quite a few. This is definitely one of the best!

my reaction...is....WoW!