ya very nice.... :-)

That was a really good poem. Thanks for the comment.

Wow. This poem is truly brilliant. I love how it is written and how smooth it flows. This is sincerely exquisite writing.

That was amazing...really touched my heart...my cousin just got back from Iraq. In one piece and walking! That was so true to what many of our soldiers are feeling or have dealt w/, I gave it a 5! Bravo!!

Sarah

.......*stares at the screen speechless*

That was very deep. I must say, I find your work to be very refreshing. I'm glad to have found your work. Few people have I seen write like this. You are truely amazing. That is especially true now as people are literally fighting on the desert floor of Iraq.

excellent poem!

The beggining remings me of Mulan for some odd reason, lol. I loved the poem though, very nice job on it! Keep up the good work and keep writing!