i liek it..godo job <33
-Mortalidaga
keep writing <33

I think this poem kicks ass! Its so honest and full of emotion... I couldn't tell it was your first suicide poem! It was great! Keep it up!

Brandy

id never have known it was yur first suicide poem. great job!!

It doesn't suck, it doesn't suck at all. It's really sad, but I loved it. Good job :)

hey i really love ur poem i over doced once but i didnt die just landed myself in the hospital i have a poem about it u sould cheek it out

I never copy poems. So don't even try to accuse me of doing something like that, suzy.

so beautiful yet so sad, i loved it it made me cry and think about my situation wich is pretty much the same.

WOW that was an awsome peom,u did a gr8t jod don't say it sucks keep up the good work! i love this peom.

wow...i really really like that....you did a good job writing it

Wow.. That DID NOT suck at all.. It's beautiful:) So sad and i love the emotions. Very well written sweetheart. *hugs* Keep it up babe.

~Jessica

That was awsome but dont give up just yet because you will never know when things change even though it dont seem like they will...just hang in there a little bit longer.

OMG ur poems r all so amazing!!!