Life As A Spider's Web

by Bryce Ellner   Aug 16, 2004


I walked 'long the brittle path
'Long the rock between the flames.
The heat seemed intensified.
But yet I felt naught of the pain.

This I was used to,
I'd been treading this path a long time.
Avoiding the pitfalls and the fire
Trying to stay walking that line.

If I stray but a little
It would mean my peril
The pillars of fire would consume me
Without so much as a farewell.

But thats how it is, isn't it,
As we walk the path of life?
Danger waits on either side
Danger, fighting, pain, and strife.

Occasionally there's a fork
Which helps us decide our fate.
You can't go back once you've chosen,
For by then it's much too late.

Sometimes there's a crossing
Where two of us meet in the middle.
We choose then whether to regard them as friends
Or sever their thread from us where it is brittle.

It's a web that everyone walks
Strung over a lake of fire.
And no matter what we do in life
We're still walking it, never tired.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    Great Job. great emotion.

  • 19 years ago

    by beaver

    Excellent work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Baby B

    Wow I like this. Makes me think quite a bit. Great job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    Isn't this absoulutely true

    Occasionally there's a fork
    Which helps us decide our fate.
    You can't go back once you've chosen,
    For by then it's much too late.

    Amazing, you are very talented!! And thanks for reading & commenting on my poems. It was greatly appriated. :)