Untitled(couldn't think of anything)

by Marie   Aug 17, 2004


I know you don't want me
I can't help it that I want you
Your my true love, I thought u knew

I love you very much
for you being you
Just to let you know
me wouldn't be me
if it wasn't for you.

You've changed my world around
from bad to good
I just wanna say thank you my love

I know I left you and said I'm gone for good
I didn't mean it
I wish you understood.

I couldn't go back to you
and look like a fool
I had to much pride
and didn't want to be called a fool.

None of that matters now
you got other things to worry about
I wish you'd come to your senses
and realize me and you were meant for eternity.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin J

    title suggestions: "Regrets In Love" or "Loves Confussion" or "Sorry..I Want You Back"

    I come up with my best ideas when I'm sleepy:p..lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin J

    If you dont write a title, ppl will think you didn't even try to write anything worth reading, and they'll blow it off.

    I think you did a good job;)

    If you reformat your stanza's, maybe make it one solid paragraph, I think readers would take to it more...that 2 rating is way harsh...I'll fix that tho;)

    btw...I hope that worked out. I know love and relationships can be crazy confusing

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