Don't 4 Get Your Son

by Marie   Aug 5, 2004


Lately hasn't been 2 good,I've been feeling pretty blue

Just crying 'cause I'm so pissed @ u.
Of course I love you & I'd rather be with you
but you've moved on & I have 2.

Don't 4 Get you still have a son
Don't punish him 4 all the wrongs we've done.
It makes me so mad 'cause you don't see what I go through.
He needs his dad, someone else 2 look up 2.
Whatever since me & u didn't work out but it's better that were apart.

I just need 2 tell u one more thing
it's truly from the heart

Our son misses u & needs u to be a part.....
A part of his life so innocent and small he misses u and 2 be honest me 2.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Bryce Ellner

    Theres alot of emotion in this poem, so I can easily tell you've got that down. Some advice I have for you is to write the rest of your poem out instead of using 2 or u to shorten down words. Also it's ok to hover around the same topic, I do that alot, but I think you should expand your horizen, write about something you wouldn't normally write about, alot of times it helps you to be more creative. Other than that I think you're doing very well, just keep writing.

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