Waiting For You

by Kaitlin Elizabeth   Aug 17, 2004


The heavens open up
The sun covered by clouds all around
The rain starts to pour
Blending with my tears falling to the ground

No one knows
I cry myself to sleep
No one knows
You're the reason my heart still beats.

Every night, Every day
My head spins with every thought.
Though my thoughts never change
Even with all the pain you brought.

Living my life for you
With every breath I take
Dreaming about you
Never wanting to awake.

You were my first love
You were my last
You will always be with me
You will never be a part of my past.

I'll always be here
Waiting for you to see
Waiting for you to understand
How much you truly mean to me

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  • 19 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Lovely work again. Brilliant.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    This was a good poem, and because I think you're a good writer, I'm going to do my best to give you any tips I can to improve. I think you should work on creating a clearer rhythm, because some lines are so much longer than others that it just seems odd when you read it out loud. I know that sometimes you just have a line that you really want to keep the way it is, so yeh, I understand where that is coming from. Just a suggestion, and keep up the good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Cantchangeme

    Right how did that get such a low rating, in my view this poem is worth a lot more, and its getting a deserved 5 from me

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