Once upon a dream

by Kaitlin Elizabeth   Aug 19, 2004


I know you
But you don't know me
I've seen you times before
Once upon a dream

We took long walks
We held hands
We watch the sunset
together on the sand

The most wonderful feeling
is knowing you're in love
First kiss under the moonlight
Dancing under the stars up above

You told me I'm the one
You told me you'll never let go
I told you I loved you
Forever our love would flow

The perfect couple
Never a doubt
You see us together
Thats what true love is all about

But every day you go away
The very moment I awake
But the second I fall asleep
Its my love you take

You might just be a dream
You maybe never come true
But I'll always be waiting
Until the day you do

It may take forever
But that doesn't matter to me
So until then I'll see you
Once upon another dream...

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  • 19 years ago

    by LostInLife!

    hey kaytee, another great poem i'm starting to really like your work
    great job!
    jemma xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    WOW i've got shivers that what so beautiful. I don't know what to say, everything about that was perfect. The way you described you two as lovers was so touching and then how it was only a dream was quite sad. Very well done, lovely poem! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Lydia O

    Very good work. It is lovely - and dreamy.

  • 19 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    pretty good stuff....loved the concept

  • 19 years ago

    by juss an allycat

    oh wow this is an incrdible poem, i love it! I like how you've combined it with fairytales and dreams. its got a smooth flow and it truly a talented piece of writing

    xxoo,
    alysse