Still together...

OK this is only my second poem, and i know it's not that good, but ya I'm trying...lol. If you have any suggestions on how i can become a better writer I would be happy to hear them. Comments and votes are always welcome:) thanks.
~Nadiya~

It was around midnight
When he left his house
The night was peaceful
Not a single sound.
The air was moist,
The moonlight shinning bright.
He reached the train rails,
He had come to die.
While laying quietly
He waited for the train,
And when it came,
It took his life away.
All of this happened
Just because of her,
The only girl that ever cared.
A night before,
When they were driving down the street.
He stopped the car
To give her something sweet.
It was a ring,
He wanted her to be his wife,
But never heard her answer in reply...
They saw a train, the car was on the rails,
It was too late to try to get away.
He pulled her quickly to the side,
The ring had fallen down, got left behind.
The girl ran back, she got into the car,
Before he realized what happened,
She was gone.
The cops had came,
The lights were all around,
But all the guy could hear
Was screaming sounds.
His love was dead, he knew she won't come back.
That's why the next day he was laying on those rails, the rails she died on, but just as her, his body motionless and dead.