Terrible poem...but oh well

by Desert Rose   Aug 21, 2004


Leave me to my endless pain and sorrow
leave me to my life with no tomorrow

If you stayed in sight at the right moment in time
u know I would tear u apart with these hands of mine

Or choke u endlessly to satisfy my hate
You KNOW that if u stayed that that would be ur fate

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    Verry deep and meaningfull poem, beautifully portrayed to the reader! Kind regards from Kane

  • 19 years ago

    by Laurel S

    Great job!! Really good poem luved it! (thanks for commenting on mine)
    ~laurel the floral