hey mike, i like your love poem alot, and was wondering if i could put it in a book with some other poems, if you could, please e-mail me. maybe you could teach me how to write about love. anyways, great poem! keep in touch!
-shawna babe

THNX, for ur comment on my poem, it meant alot, lol .. im just returnin the favor .. lol ..! Gr8 work wit this one !

like the style, mike..know the feeling,too

hey mike,
I really like this poem you wrote...passionate, touching, and sweet...I like that...keep it up :p

**LUV Sedusha**

Great poem.. It was very sweet keep it up.
Liz

a very heart felt poem, I think many of us have felt this way at least once in our lives. good job portayinf not only the love and pain, but also the fear of losing the one that you so deeply love.

--Sher

a very good poem. I liked it.

thanks for the comment on my poem "i want to be..."

take care!

~Grace

thats a great poem
I feel that way for somone
~misha~

thats a great poem
I feel that way for somone
~misha~

yeah I've felt that way too so I can totally relate
great poem
and thanks for your comment
5/5
x

interesting choice of words but nice

nice poem keep it up! :)

Think there are alot of people who can relate to this!
Really good poem, I hope you dont go crazy!!
love katie x

So True... Didn't happen too often that I felt like that but when I did, I know exactly what you mean. And when paths part it really sucks... I know. And thanks for your comment.

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