Excellent poem. Really different. Keep up the good work.
Take care,
Rachelxx

Intersting seperation of stanzas, almost in paragraph form, I like it very much, keep it up!

wow! ggod point! Strong words! Hold your head high!!
luv kt!

look around..our country is run by a fascist...

wow i have read alot of your stuff over the past but i've just decieded to become a memeber and i love nearly all your work

wow, your writing blows me away, that simply took my breath! whoa, very amazing and true, so inspirational and full of courage, i admire that :0) xxx