i envy your writing its so beautiful. i love your style and i hope i can live up to your writing one day

that's was good poem...keep it up...=p

**LUV Sedusha**

Very well written!! Great use of words!!

Man this was very good..btw, I am from Maryland. Timothy r

Thanks for the comments, people! I don't get a lot of comments or votes except from a handful of people (which I do appreciate, please don't stop).

this one is kinda depressing! but a very good point