The Dream You've Made

by Broken   Aug 29, 2004


You think love comes
With such ease
But let me tell you
Its not such a breeze

The road is beautiful
Thats the way it seems
Soon love is a drug
And you become the fiend

Everything is perfect
But only for a while
You notice little things
That slowly make you vile

The path starts twisting
As the light quickly fades
Now you are lost
In this dream you have made

You turn in circles
Trying to find a way back
You can't see anymore
Cuz this love turned black

Through your dizziness
You see a broken door
Reluctantly you enter
Knowing whats in store

From the endless tears
You know not to rush
Just let love happen
And your heart won't crush

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  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    From the endless tears
    You know not to rush
    Just let love happen
    And your heart won't crush

    that is true...

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken

    thanks guys

  • 19 years ago

    by Bryan

    I thought this was an excellent poem. The way that everything seemed to flow to perfect. I liked it alot. Great job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    thats magnificent writing doll, keep it up :)
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