I thought that your poem was well thought out and truly filled full of emotions. I also think it kinda sounds like it might possibly make a good song...Emotions ran strong, I felt like I could feel exactly what the person in the poem was feeling.

A very touching poem. It even made me cry. You did a good job at writing about abortions, it's good for people to read about this. I've written one too, it's called "Aborted" though I must say it's not as good as yours. But once again, you did a really good job! =)

~Grace

yea i kinda guessed it was about that. it is really sad and hard hitting but nethertheless excellent poem, VERY well written.
julie
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Wow! Such a grreat poem, filled with soo many diferrent emotions, it almost made me cry. I haven't read anythign this beautifull in a long time now. Ill be looking formore work from you in the future. Great poem

awww..that's so sad...:( but beautifully written...keep it up <3
-Mortalidaga
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omg, that poem made me cry!! no lie! really well written and good emotions shown!! Loved it

Great work. I must admit when i was reading i didn't have the slightest clue what it was talking about, until i read the authors notes, and it all came together. I'm not too sure which i fall under as i could never face an abortion myself and i would prefer it if pregnant women gave the baby up for adoption or something than aborting it, although i beleive it is the mothers decision....Anyway touching poem. I loved the way you never mentioned exactly what it was apart from the ending notes, that made it very powerful indeed. Very well done.

beautiful till the very last line

excellent and filled with so much emotion.

The right to choose or not, this was beautiful. Its sad to me though, that so many girls end up w/ this as their only option. I only wish they could all avoid it altogether and save the heartache...this was gre8, gave you a 5! Bravo!!

Sarah

That was a good poem! A sad one i think but good. keep up the great work!

Marie

WOW. WOW. WOW. Omg, this is sooooo great, so beautifully writtern.......so sad.......WOW. xmollyx

Wonderful poem. Very sad though... keep up the great writing and take care!

~Grace

Awesome poem, I had to read it twice to really get the message(I'm just slow), but it was even better the second time around. Keep up the good writing. P.S. Check mine out if you get the chance

wow...omg...i am so glad i read this. wonderful poem, it really touched me! you must be really talented to write this poem. i am going to read more of yours. honestly, excellent job!!!!

I have to say I wasn't sure at first what is was about but as I kept reading I figured it out. Nice work! I feel its up to the person to make the right choice for themselves. Don't know what I would do but I know if someone was raped or very young it would be a tough choice! Good work!

I was hoping u would critic me on the basic principles of poetry. Like I said I have never had any studies in poetry and I wanted to know if I’m doing well on those principles.
But don’t worry I’m not mad about the comment. I was just hoping for more info,
and to answer the question about my feeling on abortion. Well this question really has nothing to do about my feelings. It is about my two of my friends feeling because they (guy & girl) had both gone threw with abortions. They both told me about their feelings, and I never forgot their emotions. So this poems was written for them. And when I showed the girl this poem, she cried. She cried because the poem showed all the hurtles and emotion that she went threw. This poem was compose to help both of them. That is why I wrote this poem.

thank u for the comment
tourniquet

That was really something. To be honest it is really a great work. It was heart felt and I know how it feels. It was written very well and such awesome meaning behind it. Still great work!!! 5/5 =)

Can u plz read my featured poem My Story thanks a lot!!! =)

that was realy well written although very sad, it was filled with lots of emotion, u hav alot of talent xxxx

hmm i see i didn't comment on this..well i think it's kewl and interesting coz the topic isn't made too obvious in the title so i felt like reading more n more..uve got an original in ur face style i like a lot ...kudos
take care
ann