by Josh Aug 30, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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When the sun has set and gone and shadows fill my room |
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Wonderful job! Keep up the good work! |
by Bryan
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This poem was clever and sweet. I really liked everything about it. There was no weakness or bad line in this poem. You did an excellent job on it, and it flowed very well. I am deeply impressed. Great job. |