Comments : Howling In The Desert

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy

    Your dark work is definitely the best. I added you to favorites. You are pretty good, man.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dani Ward

    wow, this one was awesome. i really liked the story it tells.

  • Woah lol, that was good and creepy. When reading this I was able to imagen myself as the person in it. It's a brillaint poem. I love it, specially because it's unique
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!..u r like ssooo Good in writing dark poems.....this 1 is another great 1 penned perfectly by u..n lol...it kept me hooked up to the very end..very different n good too.Kp writing!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    Flow was off at times, but other than that, I enjoied it. 5/5

    :)

  • 16 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    Awwroooooo!
    sorry
    I loved this poem!
    of course I love anything from the canidae family.
    It could have used a little more blood though ...

  • 16 years ago

    by Rocky

    Another fantastic poem from you.the vocab , imagery and flow were excellent. i also liked how deep it was.i dont know why but these 2 lines just grabed me
    "You bundle up in the chill and hold close to the fire,
    being that sleep is your hopes only desire."
    excelent write
    Love is the law.
    Love under will.
    Rocky

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I love this one, it is great and original from the beginning to the end. You created captivating atmosphere and superb imagery, I could feel like I was there. The wording is also great in the whole piece, but I don't like the rhymes because there are too many people that use exactly the same words to make rhymes in poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I found this to be very disturbing, but of course seeing as it's in the dark category, that's a good thing..

    This was beautifully written...the many depths in this piece blew me away...very original and unique in concept and filled with such beauty and elegance...

    A beautiful piece of writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    A full of structure and thought poem, nice job xxx alex xxx