The weight of a Hundred Lives

by Krillin   Sep 1, 2004


The weight of a hundred lives,
Weighs down upon my shoulder.
It seeps into my heart,
And makes it so much colder.

Of all those lives,
Mines has got to be the worst.
Everyone has problems,
But my life is truly cursed.

If I could do one thing,
To change my life around.
I'd hold that chance close to me,
And never let this darkness abound.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki


    I love the stanza :
    Of all those lives,
    Mines has got to be the worst.
    Everyone has problems,
    But my life is truly cursed.

    I think everybody feels this way, that there life sucks and that its cursed. I know i've felt this way before. I love how you ended this poem too it really fits well.

    Also thanks for commenting on my poem, that was about my grandmother what has altzimers. I have another one called I confess that is to her also. But that is just my confessions to her. Its a horrible thing that deases! I would not wish it on my wose enemy. How is your aunt doing? I know its tough and if you ever need to talk about her and let things out i'll always talk because I know how it is.....Thanks again and awesome poem.

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