OH my God! Taht was amazing...how i wish i had your talebnt...each andf every oen of your new poems touch me in so amny ways....please keep writing! I love you words....how so i sometyimes i wish i had the courage ti dig that deep....jsut to be heard...but hey, no oen woudl prolly listen anyways...if those words can't reach ppl i don't knwpo what can. Stay strng. Luv Jamie

I have to agree that was really strong and powerful.. great job writing, and I loved how you connected the first stanza with the last.. excellent job.. keep writing

that's beauitful tears, great job...keep writing hun..<33
-Mortalidaga
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that was great u really have a good way of expressing yourself!!

love always

emily

ps check out someof my poems sometime

gosh..that makes me scared..but it's excellent!

That was a amazing job>keep up teh great werk

THIS WAS A GREAT POEM., KEEP WRITING!!!!

Omg....That was a great poem...keep on writting...your really talented:) ...good job:) hope to read more of yours :)
-SaRs-

Omg....That was a great poem...keep on writting...your really talented:) ...good job:) hope to read more of yours :)
-SaRs-

Omg....That was a great poem...keep on writting...your really talented:) ...good job:) hope to read more of yours :)
-SaRs-

this is an amazingly true poem!!!!! i can relate to every last word. keep it up!!!

alwayz,
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this poem is soooo good.. great job and keep writing.. ur an excellent writer....

That's so sad and I feel the same. I have cut myself so many times and tried to kill myself too. The thing that people need to realise is that once life's lost you can't get it back. this poem was very deep and very beautiful. I loved it.
Sammi*

that poem was awesome!! it touched me in a big way!!i so wish i could write poems as good as you can!! keep writing..maybe you can help with some of mine sometime if ya want!! keep on writing!!

shit was hot i really like that is it a true story??!!! man that was hott keep written so much talent in you

you captured all my feelings except i don't cut i eat! that is exactly how i feel! keep writing! you have an amazing talent!

Omg that poem was great it explains exactly how i feel inside and wut not

Omg that poem was great it explains exactly how i feel inside and wut not

loved it...so very raw..ive written on the same subject.my poem's called suicidal tendencies..give it a read one of these days and tell me wot u think!

it reminds me so much of my self