Hope you don't mind my calling your poem cute; I can relate!

Hey i enjoyed this poem. Took me a bit of time to find it though. I hope you keep writing loads more! Keep up your talent! :)

pretty good...not to bad.5/5 :)

shannon<33

Great poem! 5.0 ♥

Great poem i liked it alot!

GReat poem again

LMAO cute...very cute.
take care always
Scooby

That was great and funny. I loved it a lot like all the other poems I've read of yours. Good Job!

Hilarious....very relatable as it seems the best things in life always get interrupted. flow was a bit shaky but I understood every line...fun to read 5/5

A long but worth the read poem, the structure was fantastic as was the language you chose to use, really good xxx alex xxx

Okay. I didn't like this. But only cause I have a phobia of fish, lol.

Anyway.
One main thing that threw me off was the spacing. Or rather, lack of it.

I thought the flow was shaky in a few places.

However, I found the idea original and unique, and it gave me a giggle.