Wow!! That was another terrific poem!! Yup, it all flowed together so beauitfully! That was very great!! You have so much talent!!!
Amy

that was so beautifil i loved it

i loved this poem!!!! i was well written and showed a lot of emotion.

Beautifully tragic!! So intense and loving!!! Well done!!

Beautiful poem!! nice story.. I loved it!!

A superb poem. There was a constant rhythm whtoughout that piece that, upon being read out loud, made it sound catchy and poetic. I also fancy the rhymes and the schemes. Overall great job!!! :)

wow- o :'( That was such a great poem!