You part 1

by Steve_G   Sep 6, 2004


If you were here with me right now
sitting under this tree
I'd show you how much I care
I'd show you what you mean to me

Your apart of me now
My life, my soul
And anything you do
Can fill in that hole

That hole I had
For so many years
That hole i had
That holds my fears

Now I've got you
I love you so
Now your in my life
I'll never let you go

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  • 21 years ago

    by heather

    this is so sweet keep it up

  • 21 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Wow! very nice! it's so good to see some new stuff from you!

    Just a couple things to fix:
    Line 5 & 16 "your" should be "you're" and
    Line 5 "apart" should be "a part"

  • 21 years ago

    by Moonx3

    arrr....such a lovely poem,great descibtion,use of word,I love the flow, its a really neat peice of work...love ur writing,I must read more :) !!!

  • 21 years ago

    by Kari

    thats a grrrrrrrrreat poem keep up the good work ***** stars ;-)

  • 21 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Hey Steve,
    Great poem. Keep up the good work. I care about you more than words can tell. You mean the world to me. If I ever lost you.....I don't know what I'd do. I love you so so much, Steve.

    Love,
    Ashley

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