The Real Me

by TAinted vįŕťues   Sep 8, 2004


Searching for darkness
In the light
I find myself alone
Bleeding...vanishing
Into the silence
I fade away
Guess this pains here to stay
The candle light's flickering
Stolen seconds
Broken ends
They all come back to haunt me
In my silent dreams
In my dying screams
Ya I find myself
The real me
Hiding behind this mask
I find myself feasting
On the flesh of fallen angels
I find myself
Trapped inside me
I find myself
Nowhere to be found

***ALL COMMENTS AND VOTES WILL BE APPRECIATED**

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  • 21 years ago

    by Lucy

    wow, very deep, very real, if you read mine you'll find we have a similar way of writing...very good

  • 21 years ago

    by Nefarius

    yes, that was a good job, i like this style, let me know, if you write another one like this

  • 21 years ago

    by nikki

    amazing....i'm left in awe, that was brilliantly written, reminds me of not only me, but plenty of other people, thanks for reminding me i'm not alone in this. excellent job.
    xnikkix

  • 21 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    hmm... hiding behind a mask, searching for yourself, losing light in life... guess i'm not the only one. beautiful piece. it's indescribable. take care

  • 21 years ago

    by Andrea

    really good poem! keep it up!

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