Comments : The First Time

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    sweet poem thanks for your comment

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy

    Um...I won't say "sweet" seems its already been used. "Sour" doesn't really fit either...hmm....It was made with Aspartame!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Another beautiful poem.keep them coming..take care and keep smiling...

  • 19 years ago

    by cRiSs

    ..i LoVe Ur PoEmS..cAn ReLaTe..BuT yEt aGaIn..EvErYoNeS sAyS iMmA tOoH yOuNg ToOh kNoW wAt LoVe IsH..BuT nE wAy..KeEp WrItTin..

    cRiSs

  • 15 years ago

    by LoveTear

    This is cute !