Surrender * Eating Disorder*

by Luz   Sep 11, 2004


I’m giving in, I surrender my soul
It’s taken over my mind, body, my heart..
In the card game of life, I fold

I find myself on this cold lonely floor
Looking into the bowl that holds part of me
Seeing the pieces disappear as I flush once more

Looking in the mirror I see a perfect stranger
She looks at me with familiar eyes
Pleading that my life is in danger

The girl is foolish she has no clue
I go back to looking at this hideous body
As I suck it all in, I know what to do

The little that goes in will soon go out
I will be skinny, pretty, PERFECT
That’s all I am about

I have several friends that will help me achieve
Ana, Mia, you are my everything
You’re my life, not a dieses

I trade my life for beauty, perfection, the perfect frame
Soon I’ll fill that hole inside, I’ll be Beautiful and more
Everyone will Admire me, Love me, and most of all they’ll all know MY name

By. Luz Ramirez

* This poem is about my "eating disorders" as people like to call them to me they are my life style they are the one thing that keep me focused and together. I would love if you guys would comment on my poem it's self instead of the whole eating disorder thing. You can comment on my "ED" but please don't forget about the poem and it's quality*

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  • 20 years ago

    by SeXiSaMi

    i liked you poem so much! it flowed very well!

    "The little that goes in will soon go out
    I will be skinny, pretty, PERFECT
    That?s all I am about"

    i liked that stanza it was really meaningful.. just one thing remember no one is perfect. if you ever need help through that just talk to me i just got out of an eating disorder!
    ~SaMi~

  • 21 years ago

    by Luz

    thanks for this i actually just sent u a message to read it lol you can read my mind ahh get out of there lol jk

    Yah it sucks having an eating disorder well not really well yah kinda lol in soem ways it makes me feel better but i still know it's not the best esp builmia

    But thanks for the comment

  • 21 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    "I find myself on this cold lonely floor
    Looking into the bowl that holds part of me
    Seeing the pieces disappear as I flush once more"

    This was nicely put, I hope that you grow stronger with the help of your friends.

    All my love, Megan §

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