America

by Ami   Sep 12, 2004


America is not wonderful
but it is what I'm stuck with
Everything I hear about love and brotherhood
is nothing but an incessant myth

America's streets are not paved with gold
but with heroine, weed and crack cocaine
And also meth, and lies, deceit and grime
it's enough to make anyone go insane!

America's seas do not shine and shine
instead they are an eyesore
They contain so much lead and mercury
that some of the fish have more heads than Mt. Rushmore

America's skies are not beautiful
with strip malls blocking the view of the stars
along with the ever-present fog
coming out of every one of their cars

America's flag is not the most sacred
why should they hold the copyright to red, white and blue
When so many other countries
fly those colours, too?

Uncle Sam is not admirable
you cannot place any amount of trust in him
But if you do, just be assured
that there is no way you can win!

America's people are not brave and free
but they *are* very vain
They are greedy cowards, too
who take great joy in other's pain

America's morality is not supreme
indeed, all the care about is money
And they laugh for hours and hours on end
at things that aren't even close to funny!

America's sincerity is not genuine
in fact, they don't even care
And when you bring up the subject of money
they always try to take more than their fair share

America's values are not what they say
if they really were all about being free
Then why don't I even have the freedom
to really and truly be me?

The "American dream" cannot be obtained
America is just the land of twisted dreams
And not of hopeful realities
~at least that's how it truly seems!

Why did America get all the fortune
and none of the intelligence or morals
When the nations in dire need of wealth
are stuck with all the sorrows?

I wish that I could escape
even if it is just for one day
Because the price of being foreign here
Is simply just too much for me to pay

I could keep going ~ I really could
but just because something can be done
Does that mean it absolutely should?
America wouldn't even stop to ask

I could go on and on and on
but I'm starting to feel depressed
How could a single country
turn everything into such an enormous mess?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    One more thing, then who among us can speak? Have you walked in my shoes? Can any of us really share anothers life long enough to see what they have seen? He who has ot sinned can cast the first stone right? If I cann't throw one, can you?

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Ok sorry it took me so long to get back, sorry, I did think you were American I didn't read closely enough. But I am not really American either, Puerto Rican all he way baby, and I love that. But I have lived here ever since I can remember and I love it too. I have loads of friends living in Tijuana. One of them grew up as one of the richest families down there. But the government kidnapped her father 3 times and threatened to kill him as a traitor if they did not pay them, in the end they were forced to seel everything they owned to pay the debts to get thir father back. This persecutiong came because of the Mexican governments greed, they were compelled in a way that would never be allowed to happen in the country that I gladly call my own, America. I am sensitive to your situation. I am also sorry if some Americans have somehow stolen you cultural identity from you. But in my opinion a cultural identity is something of your own, it's not something someone can "steal" from you as you so graciously put it. I am also sorry if I offended you, but also being foreign myself and knowing exactly what it is like to come from one culture to a completely different one, I believe that I do not need to "put myself in someone elses' shoes" I have my own thanks, American shoes, with puerto rican laces. Not all Americans are heartless, unknowledgeable jacksasses who have no experience and no idea what they're talking about thanks. I think that you might want to look through someone elses' eyes for a change. I am not trying to say America is perfect, but what country is. I'd have to say I would rather live here than in Iraq, wouldn't you. I personally would have preferred not to get my head blown off just because the dictator's son is angry and out on a rampage killing everyone he sees. Hmm but maybe I'm just an egotistical American, why are you even reading this since we are all greedy bastards and have no idea what we are talking about, does my opinion even matter to you because it comes with a tinge of red, white, and blue. ARe you going to cast it off because it comes from the lips of someone who is proud, not ashamed or hateful, to a country that offers them freedom.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristin

    I agree, I love your poems but I do, however, think they are very harsh. I don't know your whole story, I would like to but that is up to you to share, but maybe you could lighten up. Was it that bad in America? Maybe you are just made because you had to move, no matter where it be you would be angry. America is not the kindest place in the world but it sure isn't that bad. We do have flaws, lots, but what country doesn't? Why do you show so much anger towards the US of A?

  • 19 years ago

    by hayley mcnamee

    well i have send this in most all my comments concerning america bashing.... but if you lived in a country where your government killed its people on a dailey basis wouldnt you want the super power of the world to come and save you? i am NOT saying we are the perfect country because god knows we're pretty bad... but if we are so bad then why do people dream of coming here, and even through all the bad stuff we have done the good definantly out ways it in my opinion... we are the land of the free and home of the brave, i dont know how you can say thats not true because we have millions of people who are willing to give their lives for the freedom that we claim. that is pretty brave if you ask me

  • 19 years ago

    by Ami

    I understand your point, but let me point out that I am not an American by any means. I was born in my homeland and forced to move to the USA with my family at a young age to avoid bankruptcy. While I really do appreciate not living on the streets, I have also come to realize that there is so much that money cannot buy.

    I'm glad for you, as you obviously are proud to be a citizen of America, but at least you know what being an American is. I have no idea what it means to have a cultural identity anymore. I don't know what it means to be a member of the country on my passport, and living in this imperialistic nation, I was never encouraged to learn. Now, it's too late. So enjoy your country, but realize that thanks to it, not everyone has one to call their own.

    I have many material luxuries, this is true, but if I could regain what I have lost during my stay here, I would glady live without them just so that I could be true to what I must have had at one point.

    Also, I am incredibaly unhappy with the influence America has around the world. I might be sympathetic or afford a little respect if I thought that the favour would be returned, but I've been here long enough to know that that will happen only in my dreams.

    Please don't speak untill you have walked in someone elses shoesl otherwise, how can you know what it's really like? This is turning out to be longer than I expected, so I'll end by saying that this is not meant to bash you personally in any way, but I think you could afford a little respect, and maybe even a little sensitivity.