g0oD p0eM!!! keep up that writing! b/c i luv reading your stuff!!!

thank you all for commenting.

the guy i liked was kind of popular and i'm not b/c i dont have that many friends. so i guess that's why he never noticed me. i really don't know but i felt like an idiot when i saw him with that girl and thought he was coming to me. hope that answers your question GoldenTear.

hey that is a really good poem and i know exactly how you feel like you just wish he would say hi or something but he never does and like i was feeling so low and i used to cut and wow this was just a really good poem your really good at writeing keep it up and thnx for commenting on mine!!!

That was a really a very good poem.

good poem! Thanks for the note!

that's so sad. i adore your poems as they really really touch me or i can relate to them. i loved it. take care:)

Such a sad poem! I know exactly what you are going through! I've been there but I got over it somehow in someway or another, and I hope things work out for you or you overcome it somehow. I really liked how you began the poem, so perfect how you conveyed everything =) You are such a great writer.. Great poem Andrea, Keep writing. By the way, thanks for the comments on my poems :)

Love, Jessica xxx

excellent work

i dont understand why you would feel so bad as you would wana commit suicide over a guy youve never even met.

thanks...

Good work on this poem. I'm sorry for your pain.

I love your poem, there very interesting. Keep the good work.

wow, i felt that way about someone, until i notice he was a jerk. i give this poem 7 thumbs up (although i have 2) again you have a great talent

thats so sad....

great poem but while you were watching him i bet sum1 felt the same about you keep well all the best jaime xxx

omg just to let you know, if thats about you, please stop slittin your wrists and whoever the guy is, you can do better

i loved that poem!! i can relate to it because i have the same problem with a boy i go to school with but today he talked to me but it was to tell me his friend liked me...i was happy he talked to me but sad because it wasn't him who liked me... well good work!! lenee

I've felt this way my fair share of times, good work, it's apprecaited.
-T.L.

i loved it. i love all the poems you wrote. please keep writing. i really enjoy reading your poems. they are very touching and everytime i read poem of yours i just have to read another! great job!