Awesome poem Ben. I loved it, just as all your other marvelous work. :) I especially loved the last verse. and this line :
When my eyes weep,
You are what my tears seek,

Awesome :*) Keep up the fabulous work. Hope to hear more from you soon.
-Mort
xxTakeCarexx

Thanx Sarah, i hope you are keeping well, best of luck for the future.
Ben

Thank you Ben. Same to you :)
-Mort
xxTakeCarexx

woah !! kewl poem keep writing:)

wow! excellent poem! i love it.

Very sad, but very good. I liked it alot...thanks 4 the comments on mine btw!
~Sammie

very cool poem ben, i enjoyed reading it... and thx for commenting on all my poems by the way!