Haha, very interesting. Good flow, and actually pretty amusing.

Is this a true story? If it is, you are very good at explaining it in a good humor.

Keep it up!!
Dollface.

This poems is too good and shouldnt be rated as 3.

Seriously, not just funny but constructed extremely well. There was no single word that seemed to be off in the poem..

ANyways, LMAO.....
I somehow kinda know how it felt..I like rides but one day my bf took me to the park, and i was so excited coz they have a lot of new rides..So i was ok, unil that last ride which my bf warned me about, the last time he tried it, still i forced him to come with me so yeah we ended up hurrying out of the park. Lol and there was this time as well, i got somehow like beaten up and stuff, coz that rides shoke my waist and body extremely much as i was screaming on the top of my lungs and my bf clothes being ripped off..hahaha..

Not one of your best... it was not thar funny, mostly digusting. i do like the part where you threw up on their shoes! hahaha now that was funny..
I think you could have done better..but that's just me...

**Ada**
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