excellent job, i already commented on blazing rhapsody's copy of this poem, i love it.
xnikkix

Me and Blazing Rhapsody wrote this poem together

Dude that's an amazing write. Dark, Deep and Dream like...the 3 D's :) I like your use of words/discription...it really was like you were walking the reader through a dream world where reality is bending...maybe a trip in ur head?!..it's scary in there:p lol

Excellent write...really ;)

I absolutly love it, i cant explain what it is about this poem, but i was drawn to each verse, it was brilliant, it was dark and amazing, i am speachless, i dont know what it is about the poem, but i love it, congradulations.
Ben

I liked it. Its good.

good job boys!! u've outdone urself...beautiful descriptions ...allthough 'hell's kitchen'
and 'shattered dreams' are getting a little old don't u think??...but anyway full marks 4 ur technicolour sky:) keep writing..

Great poem! the words just float through my mind and create a beautiful picture of darkness and reality. . . I love it! I can hardly explain how amazing this poem is! Keep up this great writing!

Love, Taylor

kinda confusing but reely kool and by the way that poem u asked about it was about a girl that didnt help her best frend wen he needed help
Kendra=Twisted