Foundations

by Liam   Sep 20, 2004


Every brick,
Its important,
you cant take one away,
suppose its like my life really.

You see,
We built a House,
you and I
We built it nice and tall.
But u took a brick.
The house did fall.

Fell crashing to the floor,
Didn't want it to,
This house we built,
I loved so much,
wouldn't change a thing.

But you came along,
took out that brick,
now the house I cant see.

We can build a new house,
can try again.
We got all those bricks we need.

Please?

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  • 21 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Very beautifully written poem will lot of emotions put into it...Keep them coming...Ur really talented...take care...FIVE>>>

  • 21 years ago

    by August

    "4". you managed to bring about a fine ending BUT the begining seemed devoid of something.

  • 21 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    hey Liam...this was great poem...Ckeck my poem "Heart of Mine"...5/5 Keep it up:)!!!

    **xxxxSedushaxxxx**

  • 21 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    A very good poem. Loved it! =) Keep it up and take care!

    ~Grace

  • 21 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    :'(

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