sad but good poem!!

wow...that's sad..good poem..but so sad!

Sad - yes but paints a vivid picture of depressed imagery - well done - i felt like i was in that poor boys shoes - you did a great job putting this down and by the way i loved the title!

Eirisa xxoo

This was a subject given to me by Robert and I usually write funny, or sometimes explicit for his subjects, but i wanted to do a diff category

hey awesome poem...sad...almost cried(touchy subject for me)..maybe you could check me out sometime!!

Hey thats such a good poem. It feels like it is real.