very good poem!

So beautiful & eloquently written!

A great write. Your words make the reader fell the pain and exasperation

Beuatiful , rhymes perfectly... loved reading it !

Michael,

I have always read your poeams, and there is no doubt that you continue to posses the great talent that you had when I first crossed onto your beautifully penned words.

What I really love about this piece is how is addresses the fact that one cannot control their emotions. It is as though the affairs of the heart contain a mind of its very own and no matter what we say or do the heart will always appear to control the brain.

Such sorrow and despair is vividly portayed for the reader and yet you somehow leave us with a sense of hope. It is as though we are cheering you on to love fully and openly once again.

Thank you for sharing your wonderful works and talent with us. Everything you have given us has always been a pleasant experience, even in the sad realms of poetry.

~~Sher