awww! very good poem! i love it.

Hey! just wanted to say thanks for reading my poem "I wish i could be like the rest" and i wanted to return the favor..I thought this was a really nice peice of work you have here and i wanted to say I am sorry for the depression your going through and i hope all will be well!! Nice JOb!

Ummm in TOTAL disbelief that no one else has commented on this piece! Okay firstly i loved the rhythm, the short statements made your poem really effective in expressing those deep emotions....just some advice make sure you sort of write it how you want it to be read...if you dont understand email me hun happy to help...but yeah besides that was a very unique poem full of emotion and a pleasure to read - well worth the 5!
Eirisa xoxox

i loved this poem, good job, i liked the way it flowed...

keep writing..
xox
Samz~*

great poem!! lots of emotion..nicely writte..keep ya head up!!