Beautifully written poem...Loved reading it...take care...FIVE...

Aww... I love this poem! It's so beautiful and sweet! =) Take care of yourself and keep writing!

~Grace

I really enjoyed this one alot. So sweet and touching. These are my kind of poems! Great Job! lol

great job, i like it. keep up the good work

awwwww that was such a good poem! i know that feeling too.keep up the good writing!

I'm sort of going through this right now and sorry to say but I don't know either. Hope it's not happening to you though..Either way it was awesome and flowed beautifully. I especially loved the end.

omg that is so wat im goin through only iv just moved and im back at hiome now and i cant wait to c him coz he broke up with his gf while i was away

The rhymes really make the poem flow and i love how the poem ended with a question, leaving us to think about it. Nicely done :)

lol thanks guys!

Unfortunately, no one can make this decision for you. Do what you think is right and trust your heart, but it doesn't sound like you ahve a future with this guy. There are plenty other horses in the pasture. Just relax and enjoy the single life. Love will find you. Be patient. Awesome poem and keep writing! ~dandy~

omg this is good...happened just like that to me...read saw you for the first time in a year...its almost the same...

This is sad!

Oh hun - this poem broke my heart! I hope you find the love you are searching for and deserve - i wish you all the best!

Luv Eirisa xoxo

sorry! the ryming and stanza structure seemed a bit standard.
PS-i am sympathetic to emotion, not poetry, if that explains my jerkieness!

wow... i really loved ur poem..its kinda like how i felt..wen my x broke up wit me for another girl n moved away...id love to hear more definatly a five xox ~sammy~

that poem was excellent, but if he really did find someone knew, you have to try to get over him.

very well done it flowed real nicely the subject was real good but a word of advise never give another person that much power over you. You get hurt case in point well take care hope you look at what i have to offer will be watching you

I can feel exactly what you went through when you wrote this.
The same feeling was once embedded inside me.

Take Care

Hey Hayley.. I Loved Thiz Poem Because it Just Remindz Me Of a Lot of Stuff Thatz Happened in Muh Life With Guyz.. Even Whats Happening Now.. My Guy Moved Away But We Were Still Heapz Close But Then He Got a Girlfriend.. I Still Love Him More Than Anything in Existance But i Just Have To Wait For It To Be The Right Time For Us.. I Know Our Day Will Come and We Will Be Together, Because True Love Can Not Be Stopped.. Lol I'm Talkin Sh!t Now..
Luv Ya Work Gurl,
Love Alwayz D, xx

Go get him girlfriend lol!