very deep poem.

amazing....this is the third poem ive read from you and again, i love how theyre so intelligent and emoptionally thought out. how you compared our lives to Apathy...its amazing symbolism. keep it up

WOW...Amazing poem...I love it very much...Its a really good poem Steve!
Its a deep poem!
Love Julie
XOXOX

Beautiful poem mac! *claps*...not sure what else ot say that about covers it.. definetly keep wriitng!!!
kt xx