This ain't me

by CaL25   Sep 24, 2004


Heal my heart
Heal my soul
I feel like i'm drifting away from your hold
Hold on to me tight
Or i'll have to go
That's not i want
For i need you so
Why must i be the last to know
If its not for her
I wouldn't have been so cold
For this is not me whom you used to know

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  • 19 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Good start, but somewhat lost touch in the end. May b you got distracted or something...It was koool.

    Keep up the good work!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    FIRST I WOULD LIKE TO SAY HOW AMAZING THIS POEMS STARTS , SUPERB BALANCE . HEAL MY HEART , HEAL MY SOUL .. THIS DRAWS ME INTO THE POEM AND I LOVE THE WAY IT WORKS .. HOWEVER THE ONLY REASON I CANT GIVE IT TOP MARKS IS THE ENDING SLIGHTLY DISRUPTS THE BALANCE .. ANYWAY WHO AM I TO SAY : ) 4.5 OUTA 5 . KEEP IT UP , I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEW WORK

  • 19 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    FIRST I WOULD LIKE TO SAY HOW AMAZING THIS POEMS STARTS , SUPERB BALANCE . HEAL MY HEART , HEAL MY SOUL .. THIS DRAWS ME INTO THE POEM AND I LOVE THE WAY IT WORKS .. HOWEVER THE ONLY REASON I CANT GIVE IT TOP MARKS IS THE ENDING SLIGHTLY DISRUPTS THE BALANCE .. ANYWAY WHO AM I TO SAY : ) 4.5 OUTA 5 . KEEP IT UP , I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEW WORK

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