That was a really well written poem. It was "deep" for lack of a better word. Keep it up. I really liked it. Kudos

Really decrisptive and good chosen words. i thought it was really good, the title could do some work, but other than that, i'd probably leave it since im no good at titles :P so i probably shouldn't critisize, lol, but what can i say, the poem was fantastic. amazing job. x x :)

very good...how about fire of my emotion?

...Wow..the poem was passionate and very nyce:)...5/5 on the rate;)lol..!!! Keep on the writing!!!...
~Best of Luck to your poems!~

**Luv Always Sedusha**

Great work! I really enjoyed this... and I think Nature is a good place for it. As for a title... maybe "Fantastic Flames" for an alliterated title Or maybe, "The Roaring Flames"

Just one thing I see that needs to be changed... Stanza 2 line 3... Not sure what you were going for, but it needs to be "A friendly" or "An unfriendly"...

other than that, it's an AWESOME poem!

Oh yeah I forgot to change the "an" to "a". It was like that because when I originally typed it up it was "an unfriendly stranger" but I wanted it to follow the form of the 3rd line being something good, then the 4th line turning it into something bad so I turned it into friendly. I just forgot to change the "an" to an "a" like I said, but thanks a lot for reminding me!

This was a fantastic poem, Natur eis where it should stay...Thanx for your comments on my poems as well..Keep up the great work. Love, Tim

I like title...it fits the write. I like how you held to the structure of this write, seperating the first 3 stanza's from the last 3. Awesome Job;)