that kinda gave me the chills...great poem!

beautiful in a twisted and bizarre way. truly phenomenal. i'm breathtaken. excellent job.
xnikkix

yes, yes , dark as my soul, keep on going

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!WHO TURNED OFF THE LIGHTS??.... HELP! I'M LOCKED IN!!....haha lovely poem!(though in this case 'lovely' takes on a totally different meaning) really loved the crimson fountain of inspiration...u seem to have found it through ur writing....keep up the good(read dark ,dreary and oh soo evil) work...it's like a cup of black coffee to dark poetry lovers like me:)

Hey

I am still left haunted, riverting work. fantascinatly Slick and vulgar!

Great Work!!! I have read all of your other work I reall like your style!

Please check mine out, I have a couple of poem's in the same theme, would be interested to see what you think!

Thanks, kind regards
Hayley

Your discriptions are good. BTW thanks for commenting on my poem ;), anyways I really thought that was an excellent piece how you described everything.......Great job

That was amazing, you have an awesome vocabulary, this poem was great, I got a very vivid image from this, it's brilliant!

Wow. Chilling, loved it.