Just to say I care

by Iain Jones   Sep 28, 2004


Your face sits with the stars
A glowing persona with a handful of hearts
I see you around and its makes my day great
I always wanna just wanna ask you on a date
I've hurt you before and wont do it again
but being without you is making me mad

my head is a mess but i know what I like
I've loved you for years but my visions enticed
I've tried other relationships but they just fail
they know my heart lies in your Vail

I don't deserve another chance
but I swear we could have made it last
my life is going so fast
and I don't want you to be in the past

The brown eyes that glow from your face
make my heart just skip a beat
they make me fall straight off my feet
and long for the day we go to eat

I've said it before but I cant say it again
your probably thinking bloody men
I know i screwed up and I'm sorry for that
but i just had to let you know that I really care
and if your ever in trouble I will always be there

I just want to thank you for being my inspiration
for the last 3 years.
maybe one day I could take you for a drink
and you can tell me what you think
you may just think i need a shrink
but I still see your face every time I blink

so remember I will always be here
and to my heart I hold you dear
now if you ever need a friend
I'll always be here
with a bottle made to catch your fear

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  • 19 years ago

    by GirlieLovexx

    that was such a touching poem. sounds like u really do care. uve helped me see something today that my ex keeps saying to me i wanna thank you for that. anyway good work look forward to more 5/5

    abby xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    first off, welcome to the site! very nice poem. cool rhyming and i liked how you started and ended it. tells me how this person means to much to you. hope we see more of your poetry. take care:)

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