Wow, this is so good! Awesome poem!
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Excellent poem, thoroughly enjoyed it. Prayers for the best in your spiritual journey

wow that was so good im emailing that to my buddy keep writing!

oh wow!

this was so beautiful. and i so understand how you felt when you wrote this. i, too, ask GOD, all the time to save me, or fix me, or just make things better. to heal the hurt in my heart, so i can just get over it and live a better life. what i ask for is basically a miracle, because the GOD'S honest truth, is that you have to help yourself, to heal yourself. yet i do still pray for a miracle and i am 32 years old, and finally realizing that if i help myself, he will help me help myself.

I love it...good job....keep writing.... you'll go somewhere, if you havent already.....

poems that rhyme are hard to do this is a good poem but you should just write from the soul and not let it rhyme

you expressed your emotions so clearly, well done! I loved it.

Im sure u've seen thundersrose's stuff and i pretty much love it and id just like to say that this poem is up ther with all of hers. keep riting coz u rock.

this is a goos poem and you obviously have talent! i would love if it you would read my poem "look at the bigger pocture" thnks luv ya xxx

Its so Amazing i loved it so much you really have a great talent. Your expressiveness and the way you put the whole thing together was wonderful!
It was truely amazing! Hope to here more from you.

~Erica~

Your poem "Begging creations prayer" is an inspiration to me...Thanks.

hey i love your poem its awesum..if you dont mind would you take a look at mine and tell me what you think. hey i also have a question how do you enter ur poem in a contest and how do u get so many people to see it so if you'd tell me id appreciate it thanks..keep up the good work

hunny,thats a great poem. I just read it,and it's amazingly amazing.

a really good job... SUPERB. FABULOUS !!!

I really can relate to this poem and I think it's really good.

Oh my GOD that was a great poem it was absolutely a 5. It was so just .... Great is all I can say

XOXO,
Imani

Wow! This is amazing!

Wow great poem good job!

i think that this poem dose not come from the heart, and it a very poor poem and i do not know why so many people have vote from it.