awesome! i love it, but i'm sure you've already heard this

I'm just one of the many, however this is a close relation to what i used to feel all you need is to find that single person, and it wont be like that. If you are perfect for one another, then he/she will look beyond your faults, and embrace the treasure within you.

I abousltly love this poem. Like Nicole said, God bless you. I'm sorry that your hurting like you are.

I'll be honest, if a little blunt. This sucks majorly. Its so boring. I've read, I forget it. Its just so bland. Believe me, I have read, and, I think, written a few very beautiful poems in my time and that wasn't one of them. It didn't flow, it lacked an interesting story line. It just went on and on in endless boredom.

Adding to my last comment about your work, just because you don't like my opinion, don't say I'm wrong. I seriously hate this poem. Maybe hate is a strong word, I'm really bored of this poem. This is just honest criticism, just because you someone else doesn't agree with me doesn't mean my views are not important. I think you should always strive to be better. I don't understand why everyone thinks its so great. They ere all like sheep.
Baaa Baa.

Maybe I was a little hasty in dismissing the value of this poem. It really doesn't interest me much. I suppose its above average. I was just a little annoyed that everyone thinks its great, and those that don't get targeted with so much abuse. It really is a decent poem, though not quiet to my taste.

I loved it I hope God hear's you're prayer.

I have to say, that is an excellent poem. I have felt that way before, and It really hit me... you captured all of the emotions and throughts going through one's mind at a moment like that. You really portrayed how you felt really well. Very very good job.

great job loved the ending.....

This peom is Great! I would like to read some of your other poems if you have any....i would aprecaite it if you check out my poem "until death do us part" and tell me if you think its good!--thanks much!--lyssa

i like it it really meant something

that is an ausome poem. i love it a lot.... and god does exist.... so believe in him and he will help u through..... trust me i lost my first love and i prayed that he would help me through and he did because i have finally moved on...... keep on righting those poems this one is really good

Oh crap.. i love that.. it's great

That was AWESOME!! That was just so beautiful your a great poet. Dont let anyone tell you different! Your amazing keep it up hun!!

I JUST LOVED THAT!!!

that was very nice i really liked it keep writting

That was so good, was that about u???
ur so good 5/5 i'd give it more but well u cant. That was the best poem i've read in ages make mine look sh*t.
keep it up.
Luv always Jess

Deep and dark is all i can say good poem!!!

I loved this poem. Its Deep. Good Job

5/5

Awsome poem