by Marlise Sep 29, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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I lay crying, |
by Stuart
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*runs up and saves her* lol anyways u need a better rhyme scheme and oh yeah peoms dont have to rhyme but they should flow. rhyming is just a type of poetry there are many other check most of mine for instance |
by Shædow Poet
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Hey Marlise, loved the poem. The three first lines that rhymed were great, it is truly difficult to make them all rhyme and keep up a good feel of the poem. Bravo! |