awww, very good poem! i love it!

I love this poem! It's so deep and true to the cycle of abuse. Great work, keep it up!
mwa!!!

Wow this is good, I have been going into peoples names and reading their poems. This is the first one of yours I read I am really blown away. It's really good!!!

nice poem it give off great emotion great meaning nice connecting with the reader

i think this is an awesome poem! creative, keep it up :) and i know i forgot to change the spelling thing in the poem, i forgot about that part lol. and thanks for saying you didn't do that 1 vote because i did believe it was you, since it was the most negitive comment it had. PLP

~lil slam~