My Glorious Dystopia

by TAinted vįŕťues   Oct 3, 2004


I can feel you in my head
Twisting turning stabbing
Clad in darkness...I welcome the dead

I can see you
Through this blood stained window
A mockery of love
And all things evil

Sister of Lucifer
Hail all praise to thine
My beloved concubine

Dismal lights and mirrored walls
Name your price to sell your soul
Invisible serpents lurk in these halls

You try to fade into these laconic chants
But you are caught in this cobweb of guilt

As these fake tears drop in treachery
I welcome you my dear spider lady
To my glorious dystopia

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dee

    Amazing! Very deep, excellent use of words. Keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    wow. that was really awesome. the words are very moving and i just can't explain how i feel. you truly amaze me...

    dystopia:an imaginary place where people lead dehumanized and often fearful lives.

    once again, that was amazing. take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Joy

    Hmm...this one is definitely different, but you pulled it off well. 5.0!

    =)
    .:jOy:.

  • 19 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    *is fading into laconic chants as u read this* (lol) kewl poem..

  • 19 years ago

    by Cantchangeme

    Very dark, Very interesting, Very brilliant, a very inspirational poem, love it

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