pretty damn good
keep it up
abby

Yeah, I've been out with some jerks like this guy, so i can relate.

Sorry you had to go through this too.

-Jackie

grrr i got mad just reading this !!!!
hope you find someone new!!!

great poem, blarg

omg haha this is such a great poem!!!!! lol i know someone exactly like that!!!!! omg lol this is excellent! haha u brightened up my day..... dont ask how lol brilliant work! 5/5

victor is an a s s h o l e, a horible person, i'd love to kill him ! But id be accused of arson....;)
I love, it just describs him perfectly !!!!

omg u r amazeing!
this is excellent!
great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!
>>5/5<<
bec