Comparisions

by Lexi Lou   Oct 6, 2004


A mystery waiting to be solved
a book waiting to be opened
a car waiting to be driven
a you waiting to be free

a talent waiting to be found
a masterpiece waiting to be noticed
a award waiting to be won
a love between us waiting to be discovered

a shadow behind you
a fan of a unnoticed star
a fly on the wall
a girl who knows your potential

a couple poems
a book full of songs
a story to tell
a history waiting to be made

a you
a me
a connection unnoticed
a love waiting to be sought

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  • 19 years ago

    by Aymon F

    awesome structure...im adding you to my favorites! keep the 5 flying from my fingers, haha

  • 19 years ago

    by Angel Sanctuary ©

    good job.. love it... keep it up and take care
    Angel

  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Excellent! I agree, very unique. Your poems rock! See, yours are WAY better than mine!!I mean like yours are --- < there

    and mine are _____ <---there
    :-) excellent poems

  • 19 years ago

    by Lillian

    wow, LL, I really really liked this one.. very unique.. I esp liked the last 2 stanzas. :)

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