Beautiful poem! =) I loved the way you described everything and wow it was just so great! Keep it up and take care of yourself!

~Grace

wow another great one ur so full of expression i think its great

abby xxxxx

great poem, superb choice of opening line

my comment: No comments..fellow india...that was awesome real touching poem...nice concept.

wonnderful poem i love it 5

You took me around the world once.. A good poem. The concept was good. But i think to implement that.. you sacrificed a little emotions here and there..
The last 2 lines is very beautiful.
.. Take care. Love, Trincy.

Hi Kumar Whatta beautiful love poem so complex in description yet simple and pure in the feelings enclosed in your poem - a beautiful write hun that was a true joy to read! Keep up the great work and check out my new stuff!

Luv Eirisa

Great work kumar.

this is THE most romantic poem i have read till date...and i mean it.really.

I got what you were saying around half
way through! good poem

Unique! I love how you compared the notion of love with the severn wonders of the world and making ur love the eighth. It is truly romantic and one of a kind. Superb work!!!