Comments : Bleeds...

  • 19 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    I love dark love poetry....i love this one...really liked the way that it wasnt too long...

    Tainted Virtues

  • 19 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    AmAzInG!!! beautiful imagery:)

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Thank you everyone...:DI really appreciated the comments:p!

    ~Sedusha~

  • OOouch.. That hurts! This is the first poem. i am reading.. And its incredible.. I mean.. HAve you heard about cobras? IF you hurt or kill it's mate.. the other will become furious.. It will not rest till it takes revenge... (Fact)

    This was not a poem about revenge.. But i sensed such an anger...

    Keep writing dear.. You are truly talented.

  • 19 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure

    Loved it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Aline

    I enjoyed that.

  • 19 years ago

    by Luvmeluvr

    This is a very emotional poem, and I can relate to it very well. Nice job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Luvmeluvr

    Love it. :-)