Headache

by Liam   Oct 6, 2004


My mind's messed up,
It cant see round corners
I wish it could,
Predicted all this,
Could have changed the way things are.
Could have avoided all this,
Still be living in that bliss.
The thought of us,
Just together again,
makes my heart beat,
beat again.
Re-directing the flow.
Avoiding my brain,
rid of all this pain.
Suppose i can only wish,
wish for someway,
to change the mistakes.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    kinda strange, but still a classic.

  • 19 years ago

    by Liam

    i tend not to use rhymin schemes, just good old freestyle! n i tried to cut down in commas

  • 19 years ago

    by August

    okay, i didn't understand the rhyming scheme OR the excesive commas, but you usually have a few okay lines that save your ass. "4"

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Some mistakes in life can be corrected but mistake in love is hard to forget or forgive...Thanx for ur comment on my poem...It really meant a lot to me...Take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>>

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